Sunday, 24 April 2011

Detouring Writer's Roadblock

Unexpected colors

Thundering roar.


Drawn first to the distance

And light, purest white.


Clouds painted

Water alive.


Eyes widening at the growing crown

I can't breathe, I must breathe.


Body rising

Gravity slanting sideways.


Terror rising in my chest and mind

So small now, ears full of sound.


Higher, higher

Please take me higher.


Darkness surrounding

Watery cave.


I try to scream

Upside down.


Only a moment

Will it never end?


I grasp and frail

So powerful yet elusive, water slips through my hands

And tosses me where it will.


5 comments:

Soulstar said...

I am so pleased and thrilled at your participation in this poetic venture, Jenny. Your poem is wondrously delightful to read and ponder. It also beautifully showcases the photo, your exceptional writing talent, and a gifted spontaneity! BRAVO! :)

jaye said...

Wow that'sgood!

Just Me... said...

You really did the picture justice :) Awesome.

Saffron said...

I told you not to go into Lit after washing your hair!

love it...

China Girl said...

Nice poem.