Unexpected colors
Thundering roar.
Drawn first to the distance
And light, purest white.
Clouds painted
Water alive.
Eyes widening at the growing crown
I can't breathe, I must breathe.
Body rising
Gravity slanting sideways.
Terror rising in my chest and mind
So small now, ears full of sound.
Higher, higher
Please take me higher.
Darkness surrounding
Watery cave.
I try to scream
Upside down.
Only a moment
Will it never end?
I grasp and frail
So powerful yet elusive, water slips through my hands
And tosses me where it will.
5 comments:
I am so pleased and thrilled at your participation in this poetic venture, Jenny. Your poem is wondrously delightful to read and ponder. It also beautifully showcases the photo, your exceptional writing talent, and a gifted spontaneity! BRAVO! :)
Wow that'sgood!
You really did the picture justice :) Awesome.
I told you not to go into Lit after washing your hair!
love it...
Nice poem.
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